Outside
"Sometimes I just want to pick you up and shake you like a shitty little racoon."
Ren is out of food, and the cabin fever has set in. But the world outside is...
Well. Outside.
A short kinetic novel created by Elliot Herriman and Rachel Morgan for the NanoRenO 2020+ game jam. You can play the original RenPy version, complete with Rachel's lovely music, right here.
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Hey, I should have played this sooner. It's really good. Naturalistic writing is tough to get right, it often feels fake or forced, but you nailed it.
thank you!! the truth is, though, it was all method acting! i let myself run out of food, bugged my friends over discord, had a meltdown in a park, and then transcribed the whole thing!
and then i renamed everyone, and also rewrote their dialogue, because it didn’t feel natural enough.
none of this is true, but i still appreciate the compliment!