Hey, I should have played this sooner. It's really good. Naturalistic writing is tough to get right, it often feels fake or forced, but you nailed it.
"Sometimes I just want to pick you up and shake you like a shitty little racoon."
Ren is out of food, and the cabin fever has set in. But the world outside is...
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thank you!! the truth is, though, it was all method acting! i let myself run out of food, bugged my friends over discord, had a meltdown in a park, and then transcribed the whole thing!
and then i renamed everyone, and also rewrote their dialogue, because it didn’t feel natural enough.
none of this is true, but i still appreciate the compliment!